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Thoreau and Richard C. Trench:
Conjectures on the Pickerel Passage of Walden
by Gordon V. Boudreau
ESQ, Volume 20, 2nd Quarter 1974, 117-124
© ESQ. Reprinted by permission of the editor. ESQ Home
"Ah, the pickerel of Walden! . . . They, of course, are
Walden all over and all through; are themselves small Waldens
in the animal kingdom, Waldenses." - Thoreau, Walden
(1854)
"Doubtless it is interesting to preside at the birth
of a saying which has lived on and held its ground in the world."
-Trench, On the Lessons in Proverbs (1853)[1]
Three times in his Journal during a two week span in January
1853, Henry David Thoreau was moved to quote from and comment
upon a little book by Richard Chenevix Trench titled On the
Study of Words.[2] Nowhere else in his Journal and never
in his other published works does he refer to Trench by name,
though in his unpublished "Fact Book" he recorded from
Trench's Study some thirty words with their derivations.[3]
Does Thoreau's brief Journal notice of Trench deserve no more
than the footnote attention it has received? Or should students
be alerted by William Ellery Channing's suggestion that "in
much that Mr. Thoreau wrote, there was a philological side, -this
needs to be thoughtfully considered," and look more carefully
at the possible impact of the English philologist upon Thoreau?[4]
A careful examination of Thoreau's brief encounter with Trench's
work in the winter of 1853, as revealed in the Journal, together
with clues in the genesis of Walden point to Trench's
Study as a factor in the formulation of Thoreau's famous
pickerel passage in "The Pond in Winter." And while
this appears to be the only visible mark of Trench upon Thoreau's
works, it is nonetheless significant in prying ajar, however
narrowly and briefly, the door usually drawn shut upon the workings
of our greatest authors. Because of its speculative character,
I offer this discussion as that of Thoreau's "friend [who]
will be bold to conjecture; he will guess bravely at the significance
of my words."[5]
The three borrowings from Trench acknowledged in Thoreau's
Journal - in the entries for January 15, 16,.and 27, 1853 - are
from a second edition (1852) of On the Study of Words
(a shorter first edition appeared in late 1851). Interestingly,
the Study was in some measure inspired by Ralph Waldo Emerson's
"The Poet," for in the first edition Trench refers
to "a popular author of our own day [who] has somewhere
characterized language as 'fossil poetry'"; moreover, the
"Introductory Lecture" and Chapters Two and Three -
"On the Morality of Words" and "On the History
of Words" - carry forward Emerson's captivating phrase.[6]
Thoreau's creative imagination is already evident in his elaboration
upon Trench in the first Journal borrowing. Trench writes: "Take
three or four of these words, 'transport,' 'rapture,' 'ravishment,'
'ecstasy' - 'transport,' that which carries us, as rapture,'
or 'ravishment,' that which snatches us, out of and above ourselves;
and 'ecstasy' is very nearly the same, only drawn from the Greek."[7]
Thoreau responds: "True words are those, as Trench says,
- transport, rapture, ravishment, ecstasy. These are the words
I want. This is the effect of music. I am rapt away by it, out
of myself. These are truly poetical words. I am inspired, elevated,
expanded." And with a deft wit he punningly concludes, "I
am on the mount" (J, IV, 466-467).
For its support in completing this project, I
am grateful to the LeMoyne College Research Committee. I also
am indebted to Dr. Taisto Niemi and Mrs. Esther Cheng of the
LeMoyne College Library for their generous assistance.
1. The edition of Walden cited here
and subsequently is that edited by J. Lyndon Shanley (Princeton:
Princeton Univ. Press, 1971), p. 284. Richard Chenevix Trench
(New York: Redfield, 1853), p. 32. Back to text
2. Richard Chenevix Trench (1807-1886), born
in Dublin and educated at Harrow and at Trinity College, Cambridge,
was one of the famous "Apostles." After taking part
in the ill-fated expedition of General Torrijos and the Spanish
Exiles, he returned to England, married, and was ordained an
Anglican priest in 1835. He served for many years as Archbishop
of Dublin. His popular (nineteen editions in his own lifetime)
On the Study of Words, which originally appeared in 1851,
was the first of five philological works that he wrote in mid-career.
On Some Deficiencies in Our English Dictionaries (1857),
originally given at a meeting of the London Philological Society,
outlined the proposal that eventually resulted in the publication
of the Oxford New English Dictionary. Trench's numerous
publications are in divinity, history, literature, and poetry.
For his contributions in philology see Hans Aarsleff, "English
Philology to 1860," Language in England, 1780-1860
(Princeton: Princeton Univ. Press, 1967), pp. 211-263; "Historical
Introduction," Oxford English Dictionary, I (Oxford,
1933), vii a; Simeon Potter, "English Language, III. Historical
Background. 6. The 19th and 20th Centuries," Encyclopaedia
Britannica (1970). The only biography of Trench is J. Bromley,
The Man of Ten Talents: A Portrait of Richard Chenevix Trench,
1807-86: Philologist, Poet, Theologian, Archbishop (London:
S. P. C. K., 1959), which includes a bibliography. Letters
and Memorials [by Miss M. M. F. Trench], 2 vols. (London:
Kegan, 1888), provides helpful biographical material. In addition
to these sources, I have made use of the Trench entry in the
Dictionary of National Biography (1937-38). Back
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3. Kenneth Cameron, ed., Thoreau's Fact
Book in the Harry Elkins Widener Collection the Harvard College
Library: Annotated and Indexed (Hartford: Transcendental Books,
1966), 1, 143-144. Arthur Christy, "A Thoreau Fact-Book,"
Colophon, Part XVI (March 1934), n. pag., first published
the list, though omitting "miscreant."
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4. Thoreau: The Poet-Naturalist, new
ed., enlarged and edited by F. B. Sanborn (Boston: Goodspeed,
1902), p. 77, n. John Aldrich Christie, Thoreau as World Traveller
(New York: Columbia Univ. Press, 1965), p. 117, and Sherman Paul
, The Shores of America (Urbana: Univ. of Illinois Press,
1958), p. 412, are among the few notices, brief as they are,
of Thoreau's reading Trench. Back to text
5. References to the Journal of Henry David
Thoreau are to The Writings of Henry David Thoreau, 20
vols. (Boston: Houghton, 1906), VII-XX, but I have adopted the
alternate numbering of these volumes, I-XIV. The reference here
is to III, 83. Subsequent references to the Journal will appear
in parentheses in the text with J preceding volume and page numbers.
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6. According to Cameron, p. 10, and Christy,
n. pag., Thoreau used the 1852 edition (New York: Redfield),
from the revised and enlarged 2nd London edition. A comparison
of Thoreau's Journal quotations with both editions makes it clear
that Thoreau used the second edition. See in the first edition
(London: Parker, 1851), pp. 4, 5, 10. A late edition of the Study
(New York: Armstrong, 1881), p. 118, removes any doubts: "Emerson
has somewhere characterized language as fossil poetry."
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7. Study (New York: Redfield, 1852),
p. 19. Back to text
Pickerel Picture Credit:
Edward C. Migdalski & George S. Fichter, The Fresh and
Salt Water Fishes of the World. NY: Alfred A. Knopf, 1976.
Page 130. Title of Illustration: Chain pickerel (Esox niger).
Artist: Norman Weaver.
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